I have been thru this phase and also come out of it ... thats y the intense feelings ...
Want …..
Life is full of desires and wants
Some you get but some you cannot
You are happy with the ones you got
But the unfulfilled ones, forget you cannot
Initially, Desire is at its zenith
You see it, like it and want to want it
No other thought comes your way then
You want it and want it, even if it pains
Only the desire hovers on your mind
Nothing else makes you happy, no one of other kind
You heart demands and you try to obtain
You don’t think of the loss or gain
Time passes by and you are still struggling
To get ‘that’ thing, which made you swing
Hope is still filled in your heart
Coz From ‘that’ thing you don’t want to depart
All the things change around, but you
Just because you don’t want to
You keep on following your heart
Not realizing that it is a brat
Your heart waits, your heart cries
Still to the fullest it tries and tries
You keep on running behind it like hell
Till it is lost and begins to fail …
Ceases down slowly now the feel for the desire
Your heart is fed up and is tired
Your want for ‘that’ was just an image
Nothing was true, all was a mirage
Don’t succumb to your heart when it wants something
Wait for a while and let it shrink
The world will change with just a blink
Accept your share of what the destiny brings
8 comments:
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wont comment on the content other than the fact that its nicely written.
Thanks, but I am not able to identify you. Who is 'Visiting nomad' ??
Gaurav:
"I have been told
that force has no significance. No soul moves by force.
What I want will not come to me just because I desire it.
I have been told that I cannot force"
Bhagyashri: Appreciate the style of writing. Very simple but yet very forceful.
But are you suggesting not to dream or desire for anything??
I know these are your thoughts but I feel this desire to fulfil our dreams is what keeps us going. And trying to curb it for fear of failure would mean losing the very essence of life.
I agree with u bhagyashri. But u cant run behind something which u know u ll never get. its then when u should wait and take what the destiny has got for u ...
very nicely xpressed!!!.. Frankly speaking majority of us go thru this phase of intense desire and feeling. As u rightly say sometimes we have to let it go though it's hard.. This reminds me of a quote "Know when to leave the good.. so u get the best!"
Keep blogging :)
I am surprised that you cant identify me. But thats good. I am just as my identity says, a nomad who keeps visiting :-)
Btw, did YOU write the poem ?? You have done a pretty good job is you have ...
vow..it seems this is a very thought provoking poem..but is actually very ' in the face' its reality ..and i agree and appreciate it..
you have a way with words
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